Monday (and possible Tuesday) I'll be focused on writing instruction. Since we just did our fall writing assessment, I have a few areas that I want to provide some explicit instruction. In particular, we're going to work on expanding the examples we give to support a main idea. Having details isn't really the problem for us as much as going deeper with each.
Part of me feels like it goes back to formulaic writing. You have a main idea, then add a supporting detail meshed in with a transition, maybe a transitional phrase/sentence, then add another detail. Eventually you've layered it so that it appears to be really detailed. Unfortunately the result is that you get a list, and not deep thinking about a particular detail (why it is meaningful to you, why you are writing about it, etc).
Monday we'll be talking about what we are thankful for. But instead of listing 50 different things we are thankful for, we will really look deeply at 1-2. I'm also shifting from the bubble map pre-write to an outline of sorts. Visually this will give kids a better feel for how their writing will flow, and whether each example has enough detail. We'll also focus on making personal connections to these examples, which should add more voice/style. It is tough to have style if you don't make a connection to it (i.e. vivid description, meaningful phrasing, etc). Good way to get us moving into the break.
I, too, was looking for a good idea for a couple writing lessons this week, post CDSA. I'm inspired by your thankfulness idea. It'll be perfect for my continued focus on expository.
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